I am a student. This is a place where I will share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas
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Tuesday, 29 May 2018
Writing - Term 2
Briley is learning to underline words she is unsure of and add detail to her writing.
I like your simile - "It is as pretty as a sparkly pen". You are really thinking about how you can make your writing interesting to read. Great work Briley!
I like your simile - "It is as pretty as a sparkly pen". You are really thinking about how you can make your writing interesting to read. Great work Briley!
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